Critique 2 drawings!

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• CookiesCream2

  June 2008 99.137.16.124

  BUMP! Whilling to pay for linearting!!<br><br>Please Critique it!

  
• ParanoidThoughts8

  June 2008 68.238.79.162

  i actually think its really good,<br>i know im not wonderful myself<br><br>but i see a few things<br>-paws/legs. paws look kinda deformed...and the ankle/wrist on the front foot should be lower.<br>thr sholder part kinda bunches up at the top.<br><br>but its actually good<br>:D<br><br>(i could lineart for 200k?)

  
  
  
• KiteKatsumi9

  June 2008 66.63.86.119

  The head is also a bit big. I recommend studying diagrams of dog skeletons, they help tons. They show how big things should be compared to others on a dog, where things can bend, etc.

  Bye.
• ParanoidThoughts8

  June 2008 68.238.79.162

  Kite_Katsumi wrote:

  The head is also a bit big. I recommend studying diagrams of dog skeletons, they help tons. They show how big things should be compared to others on a dog, where things can bend, etc.

  <br><br><span style="font-size:75">skeletons scare me kite<br>:shock: <br>lol<br>they do help<br>:D</span>

  
  
  
• CookiesCream2

  June 2008 99.137.16.124

  thank you for your critiques. I forgot to mention it was suppose to be like a bloodhound. I probably could have my dad look at it, he is an amazing drawer. I have a picture of a sinister shepard i will upload. It took my and hour or so with my dad's porpotion help.

  
• CookiesCream2

  June 2008 99.137.16.124

  :arrow:

  
• ParanoidThoughts8

  June 2008 68.238.79.162

  <span style="font-size:75">the shepherd is posing just like a shep would<br>:D<br>just work on paw structure<br><br>and the ears need to be moved forward a little<br>and make them a bit bigger</span>

  
  
  
• CookiesCream2

  June 2008 99.137.16.124

  Thanks lolo. I am horribly at paws, I thought I would try something new. My dad told me to bring the ears back, I guess I brought them to far back hehe.

  
• ParanoidThoughts8

  June 2008 68.238.79.162

  haha<br>well deviantart<br>has good tutorials for paws!<br>check there

  
  
  
• CookiesCream2

  June 2008 99.137.16.124

  thanks lolo. I'll have a look.

  
• CookiesCream2

  July 2008 75.54.234.183

  BUMPING

  
• CookiesCream2

  July 2008 75.54.234.183

  Bump

  
• tarnish

  July 2008 76.188.29.101

  The shepherd doesn't remind me of a shepherd...it looks really similar to the first one. I am not great with drawing dogs so I am not sure how you would fix it.<br><br>And I can line if you want me to. Just let me know.

  
• CookiesCream2

  July 2008 75.54.234.183

  Thanks Tarnish!! Pming you about lining