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a random blue doggie:D-critique-

ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
edited June 2008 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:75">hes a mixed breed<br>:D<br><img src="http://i29.tinypic.com/2r5re2p.png"; alt="http://i29.tinypic.com/2r5re2p.png"; class="bb-image" /><br>umm i got bored<br>it took around an hour<br>i know i should be doing banner comissions<br>*hides*</span>
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  • EpikLoveEpikLove
    75.59.214.228
    He's very cute ^^
    bluehh.
  • KiteKatsumi9KiteKatsumi9
    66.63.86.119
    Cute :D The eyes strike me as a little too small, but I love his little fangs up top poking out X3
    Bye.
  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.79.162
    Kite_Katsumi wrote:
    Cute :D The eyes strike me as a little too small, but I love his little fangs up top poking out X3
    <br><br>thank you<br>:D
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  • Doggirl1995Doggirl1995
    68.150.38.215
    Aww.. so cute :D<br><br>Critique.. well, as Kita said, eyes look a little small, but other than that they are done awesome :D<br><br>And.. ears, they just don't seem right to me. But great job on it!
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    Thanks for the lovely banner, Nickel :)
  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.79.162
    Hose-Frog-Pickle wrote:
    Aww.. so cute :D<br><br>Critique.. well, as Kita said, eyes look a little small, but other than that they are done awesome :D<br><br>And.. ears, they just don't seem right to me. But great job on it!
    <br><br>hehe<br>the ears are hugeee<br>:D
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  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.79.162
    :wink: i want more critiques
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  • CobaltCobalt
    69.154.143.231
    Well, I'll give you one then :)<br><br>The eyes, like mentioned before, are a bit small. Also, it may jsut be me, but he seems to be really chunky. Perhaps make him either more angular or add fur texture and it'll look a little more realistic. He's very cute, though, and I love the coloring :D
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  • KiteKatsumi9KiteKatsumi9
    66.63.86.119
    Oh, I remember what the other thing was XD<br><br>The teeth are wrong. Not the top canines, the others. The ones beside the tongue aren't the right shape and they're too close together. The ones under the tongue...the left seems to be growing out of the dog's lip as opposed to in its mouth. Move it back a bit to be level with the other one :D
    Bye.
  • butterthorbutterthor
    76.14.28.188
    Ya I agree. The eyes are a little small and teeth to be slightly imporved. But I LOVE it. It is great and I love the coloring, will these be for sale and if so, for how much?
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  • TuffGirlTuffGirl
    98.194.25.104
    I love everything but theeyes seem a little tiny
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