Ok that's it! I'm going to get a bad grammared paragraph and give it to the editors, and as for the writers this is the subject you have to write on in one paragraph, or up to 20 sentences no more.<br><br><span style="color:red"><span style="font-style:italic"><span style="font-weight:bold">SEND ALL STUFF TO ME THROUGH PM</span></span></span><br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span> Dog Stuck in Mud<br><br><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Case</span></span><br>Dog's Name: Bongo<br>Age: 8<br>Breed: Golden Retriever<br>Info: Bongo was swimming in a river the day after a huge storm and when owner, Ben Lewis, called Bongo out, Bongo stepped into a hole that was covered in thick sludging mudd. He was stuck for two hours and when he came out he had a sprained leg. It took professional groomers at least four hours to get Bongo back to his normal looking self.<br>Your Job: Write a paragraph or up to 20 sentences covering this story from Bongo getting stuck in the mud to getting the mud out of his fur. Make it as if you were there the whole entire time it happened. Stick to the facts and don't make up anything that didn't happen like a broken leg. When you are done post your stories here. WARNING: If your grammar is horid this could effect your chance of a main writer/writer.<br><br><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">For The Artists</span></span><br>Artists may apply any time durring this, but have your entry before July 10. [date may change, i want this to be a fare entry]<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Project:</span> Draw The Three dogs, and have them colored, within now and 7/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Dog 1:</span><br>Breed: Whatever breed you can draw the best [and I mean ANY breed]<br>Look: The dog should have spectacles on it's nose and a quill in it's hand, with a piece of paper and an ink jar on a near by desk.<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Dog 2:</span><br>Breed: Whatever breed you can draw the best [and I mean ANY breed]<br>Look: This dog should be wearing a writers hat with one of those feathers in it, if you know what I mean, and sitting at a desk with a typewriter.<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Dog 3:</span><br>Breed: Whatever breed you can draw the best [and I mean ANY breed]<br>Look: This dog should have an artist look to it. This dog will represent the artist in our paper so make the dog have a paint pallet in it's hand and in the other a paint brush.
Name: Pepper97<br>Applying For: Editor<br>Why you deserve this spot: I deserve this spot because I am highly inteligent, make all A's in Language Arts, hate computer slang, and I am the school news editor.<br>What can you do for us: I can make all of the articles sound much better, witch will make the ratings go up, and that will make VPans want to read it more because it will be more understandable than most newsletters.<br>How do you have experience: 3 years oof being school news editor, I homeschooled most of my elementary school years and we baisicly worked on grammar and conjunctions.<br>How long you have been on VP: Almost 2 years, but know more about VP than most people.<br>Kennel Link: <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=147005"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=147005</a><br>Other: n/a
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For the writing we can add details that weren't mentioned, right? I just want to be clear on the rules. I can make up things like the dates?<br><br>P.s. I find it hilarious when people apply for editor and their posts have spelling errors and grammer errors. Sorry but I find that amusing. xD
For the writing we can add details that weren't mentioned, right? I just want to be clear on the rules. I can make up things like the dates?<br><br>P.s. I find it hilarious when people apply for editor and their posts have spelling errors and grammer errors. Sorry but I find that amusing. xD
<br><br><br>XD<br><br>You're such a meanie, Tarn.<br><br><span style="font-size:17">But I would have to agree...teehee.</span>
Lol. I guess I can be a bit of a meanie. Let's see, only 9 more sentences. xD <br><br><span style="font-size:9">I thought that might amuse others too.</span>
For the editing bit, I'm leaving tomorrow at 5:30 am and won't be back until Thursday night. Is there a way for you to wait until I get back and can edit your article before you give judgement? That'd be great
I would so write one if I wasn't applying for editor myself. It's fun <br><br>It doesn't have to be long (although it can be if need be.)<br><br>Just write a paragraph or two, and make sure to include spelling errors(ones that might be hard to detect), punctuation errors, grammatical errors, capitalization errors, sentence fragments, and anything else you can think of.
I had a whole spelling book of words that are mixed up. There, Their, and They're...all the idioms....<br><br>Like I said, if you need me to type one, i'd be glad to. ;-]
I had a whole spelling book of words that are mixed up. There, Their, and They're...all the idioms....<br><br>Like I said, if you need me to type one, i'd be glad to. ;-]
<br><br>There, their, and they're are not idioms. Idioms are phrases not single words.
<span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">For Zee Editors!</span></span><br>Now go ahead and fix this paragraph ^_^<br><br>On July 15 2008, young bongo a Golden retreiver got stuck in a mud hole at Indian Point River. Owner, ben lewis said, Bongo is a stong and beautiful golden retriever, who never gived up in a long battle between the mud. Officials took two hourse to get Bongo out of the mudhole and when they did, he was full of mud. It was the day of the biggest dog show in town and young Bongo was ready. his owner had picked him up from the kennels and they were on their way to the show On the way there the truck ran out of gas. <br><br>This was the beginning of a very long day The Owner had to walk to the nearest store to get someone to give him a ride to a gas station. It was another hour before he got back. But when he did, they made it just in time to get Bongo groomed and ready for the show Bongo ended getting 1st place!
<span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">For Zee Editors!</span></span><br>Now go ahead and fix this paragraph ^_^<br><br>On July 15 2008, young bongo a Golden retreiver got stuck in a mud hole at Indian Point River. Owner, ben lewis said, Bongo is a stong and beautiful golden retriever, who never gived up in a long battle between the mud. Officials took two hourse to get Bongo out of the mudhole and when they did, he was full of mud. It was the day of the biggest dog show in town and young Bongo was ready. his owner had picked him up from the kennels and they were on their way to the show On the way there the truck ran out of gas. <br><br>This was the beginning of a very long day The Owner had to walk to the nearest store to get someone to give him a ride to a gas station. It was another hour before he got back. But when he did, they made it just in time to get Bongo groomed and ready for the show Bongo ended getting 1st place!
<br><br>We send it to you by PM? Sorry if it already says that. :P The forums are REALLY slow for me right now and it would take forever for me to check.
We is the snad ones. Sandy and Liz and Horse. Fear us. Meow.
Wheaty is also one of the snaddest people ever.
And so is ViVi
But not Middy. x3
When the newspaper starts up, I should be a gossip columnist. lol!<br><br><span style="font-size:59">(I'd probably be banned from VP forever) xD</span>
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Wheaty is also one of the snaddest people ever.
And so is ViVi
But not Middy. x3