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Mikey Makita · June 2008

Can you guys critue two of my RPG charecters for another site?Yes,they are named after two VP citizens xD.I could`nt think of any other names. :A Little Backround: Kite and Weisse are twins,born to Krazy Kat.They are both 5.Thier scars show which one is which.Kite has a kind of K scar on her left shoulder,while Weisse has a crazy W and 3 claw marks under her eyes. Kite_Katsumi- <img src="http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32/blackshadow768/KiteKatsumi.jpg"; alt="http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32/blackshadow768/KiteKatsumi.jpg"; class="bb-image" /> WeisseEdelweisse- <img src="http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32/blackshadow768/WeisseEdelweisse.jpg"; alt="http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32/blackshadow768/WeisseEdelweisse.jpg"; class="bb-image" /> I made up their personalitys xD I know Weisse is not shy.Least on here shes not

KiteKatsumi9 · June 2008

They look nice

I only request that you make sure wherever you're RPing that they know you didn't come up with my name. Next time, I'd love it if people'd ask me before using my name for their personal use. Not ranting or flaming. Just requesting.

Mikey Makita · June 2008

Sorry. I told them I named em after two friends on another forum xD

PishPosh · June 2008

I can't see the image.

Mikey Makita · June 2008

I see them o.O Heres the links- <a href="http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32/blackshadow768/Linearts/WeisseEdelweisse.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32 ... weisse.jpg</a> <a href="http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32/blackshadow768/Linearts/KiteKatsumi.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb32 ... atsumi.jpg</a>

PishPosh · June 2008

Butt and stomach are way to skinny, thicker neck, and a bit longer body.

Mikey Makita · June 2008

I did`nt draw em,I colored em xD Shoulda put that in first post o.O

KiteKatsumi9 · June 2008

I was wondering about that XD Now that I look again, you put me as outgoing XD I don't know if I'm considered outgoing here or not? But...in real life, I'm very antisocial. :P Kinda like how Edel's not shy XD haha. Randomish.

Mikey Makita · June 2008

Then I guess its a private joke if your complete opposites from your charecters xD This was my first one with scars*does the scar dance*

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