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Its Poem By Wheatie Time!

edited May 2008 in General Discussion
<span style="font-weight:bold"><span style="font-size:75">yah!</span></span><br>
<br><span style="font-size:75">My security blanket was always there, <br><br>until a few months back <br><br>In one fatal day, <br><br>it all just went away. <br><br>I had no one to talk to. <br><br>No neck to cry into. <br><br>You just left. <br><br>For so many years you were there, <br><br>there to dry my tears, <br><br>listen to my problems, <br><br>without saying a thing back I just felt better. <br><br>Your still alive in my dreams, <br><br>but then I wake up, and the tears stream again. <br><br>Since you died, who has been there to dry my tears, <br><br>listen to me as I cry, <br><br>listen to what is making me mad. <br><br>You weren't there when Whitney died, <br><br>you weren't there when i fought with my friend, <br><br>you weren't there when they told me Ben may be getting put down. <br><br>Where were you this morning, when i needed someone to talk to? <br><br>Where were you Saturday, when i needed someone to cry to? <br><br>Your not there anymore. <br><br>I miss you Sunny.</span><br>
<br><span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-weight:bold"><br> :cry: i was very sad when i wrote it but i made it angry but i dont know so D;<br><br>some critque would be nice</span></span>
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Comments

  • *cries in Wheaty's shirt*<br><br>Sooo good! You told what's from the self, and that is what makes a good poem. =D<br><br>*blows nose into Wheaty's shirt*
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  • I think it is lovely.
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  • Nice poem, but which sunny...?<br><br><3 nice poem though ^^
    "I am carrying all my hatred and contempt for power, its laws, its authority, its society, and I have no room for guilt or fear of punishment."-Diego Rios
    Semper Fi.
  • I think its her horse named Sunny that died not long ago if I remember right.
  • Aww :cry: Sunneh <3 horsehs
    "I am carrying all my hatred and contempt for power, its laws, its authority, its society, and I have no room for guilt or fear of punishment."-Diego Rios
    Semper Fi.
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