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Seth

NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
edited May 2008 in Artist Alley
Finally got the energy to finish this pic up xD<br><br>Critique is wanted. However, dont mention the uneven lines (can you tell I use a mouse?) since, I couldn't really help it xD And of course, all comments are appreciated. <br><br><br><img src="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth.png"; alt="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth.png"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Anyways, for those of you who dont know, he's one of my RPG characters. Also will be one of my main characters in a story I'm working on =D<br><br><br>Thanks for looking.<br><br><br><br><span style="color:red"><span style="font-style:italic">This Image Is Copyrighted, And Is Not Available For Use Without Permission.</span></span>
All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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Comments

  • KazukoKazuko
    72.222.218.160
    Alright, the face structure itself is nice enough.<br><br>However, the eyes are really blocky. Even in anime style, eyes never look that way. The eyebrows are too short. The mouth the way too far down, and at such an angle that, again, wouldn't even bee seen in anime. Also, the ears are also too short. xD But I do like the hair and background. xD
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  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    edited May 2008 71.87.69.30
    Any idea on what kind of brush I can use? For the eyes, I had them drawn un-blocky (excuse my bad english xD) but with the brush, its impossible to draw them rounded :? and I'm using a circle brush o.o<br><br>I can fix the eyebrows easy enough, as well as the ears. And the cool thing? I can move the mouth! xD<br><br><br>Hmm... if you (or someone else) could redline, or put arrows to where things should go, that'd be appreciated =D<br><br><br>Thanks for your input ^.^<br><br><br><br>Hmm, Dunno if this looks any better...<br>(Didnt fix ears... I cant draw ears as it is, so Im leaving them as is ^.^)<br><br><img src="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth2.png"; alt="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth2.png"; class="bb-image" />
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
    mini_nickel_vere_roan_quin_by_evlonarts_d6ih13_by_jaded_night-d775ero.png
  • KazukoKazuko
    72.222.218.160
    xD I can hardly draw people, I just know from what I've seen.<br><br>I'd use a small circle brush. Size three or so.
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  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    71.87.69.30
    This better?<br>(eyebrows make him look evil o.o)<br><img src="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth3-1.png"; alt="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth3-1.png"; class="bb-image" />
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
    mini_nickel_vere_roan_quin_by_evlonarts_d6ih13_by_jaded_night-d775ero.png
  • KazukoKazuko
    72.222.218.160
    Does look quite a bit better. =3 Now his eyebrows curve funny, and the mouth still looks a bit weird, but it's officially better than I could do with a mouse, or even on my tablet. =p
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  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    71.87.69.30
    xD Ill have to draw eyebrows & scan them, because... this mouse doesnt like me very much xD Ill look at more mouth examples, I never really looked at anything for mouths, I kinda just doodle them on there :lol: <br><br><br>Anyways, thanks for pointing all that out =D I will definatly improove on those areas the next time I draw (instead of sloppily fixing them) :D
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Young_NativeYoung_Native
    207.118.98.62
    The nose looks kind of funky, and the eyebrows make him look like one of those crazy italian villians. :D But overall it looks great, eyes need some rounding and face a little too long. Hiar is nicley done :3 and luffs the background! Overall its nicley done except for some minor errors. :] Nice job Nickel!
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    "Discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in New Eyes."
  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    71.87.69.30
    Young_Native wrote:
    The nose looks kind of funky, and the eyebrows make him look like one of those crazy italian villians. quote]<br><br> :lol: :lol: That made me laugh out loud so hard xD Its the truth, I thought the same thing :lol: Heh, That's on my list of things to change (tried to do it with a mouse xD) I'll sketch eyebrows tonight, and put them on tomorrow :P <br><br>Thanks :D
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Young_NativeYoung_Native
    207.118.98.62
    Lol atleast you got a laugh out of my statement, I thought it sounded a little harsh since no one loves those crazy eyebrows that happen to pop up on those evil italian villans XD. I can't wait till update :D
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    "Discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in New Eyes."
  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    71.87.69.30
    Young_Native wrote:
    Lol atleast you got a laugh out of my statement, I thought it sounded a little harsh since no one loves those crazy eyebrows that happen to pop up on those evil italian villans XD. I can't wait till update :D
    <br><br><br>Lmao, I thought the same thing, so, I guess I was being harsh on myself xD I guess when you try to draw eyebrows in 2 seconds with a mouse, it happens :lol:
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    71.87.69.30
    Ok, I think its looks better xD<br><br><img src="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth45.png"; alt="http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x6/Nickelsbanners/Seth45.png"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>Mouth fixed? Mer, not sure if it really is fixed or not. I re-did it and the evil eyebrows with a mouse, but... I softened them, and it seems to have turned out much better =D<br><br>Can also view the full profile on my DA(tis long, so dont wanna post it here):<br><br><a href="http://dannyphantom66.deviantart.com/art/Seth-86236085"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://dannyphantom66.deviantart.com/art/Seth-86236085</a><br><br><br>Though, Im thinking I should just stick to making backgrounds xD I luff the background, I dunno how I did it o.o
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
    mini_nickel_vere_roan_quin_by_evlonarts_d6ih13_by_jaded_night-d775ero.png
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