Lineart Critique

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• tarnish

  April 2008 76.188.11.24

  What program did you use? <br><br>If it has layers you can make a new layer and outline it. When you are done you can delete the layer with all the pencil and scanner marks. It makes it look clean. (though I see it doesn't look finished)<br><br>It looks good to me so far.

  
• Cobalt

  April 2008 69.153.250.28

  This is the version I hand drew. I scanned it into the PC and Lovely Doodle transferred it into a digital lineart: <a href="http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z55/Cobalts_Sales_Kennel/digitAL.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z55/ ... igitAL.png</a><br><br>Anyway, I'm in the process of coloring it at the moment ^.^

  
• maggiexox

  April 2008 71.167.116.163

  let me know when its colored, i would love to see the finished product! looks great!!!!

  
• WeisseEdelweiss

  April 2008 72.72.230.99

  Well, the first thing I noticed, was the it looks like he's standing on air toward the front.<br>A good thing to do is make sure the feet are at the same level.<br>Also, the tail is not quite at the right length. It's much too long.<br>It's a nice start none the less. ^^
• Cobalt

  April 2008 69.153.250.28

  Cobalt wrote:

  Oh, and the reason his front legs are a bit higher than his back legs is because in the final picture I'm gonna have him standing on something.<br>

  <br><br>This explains the foot thing a bit. Thanks for the critique, though

  
• WeisseEdelweiss

  April 2008 72.72.230.99

  I see. :O<br><br>Also, I noticed that the body is too long. Using the crop toll can fix that. ;3
• Cobalt

  April 2008 69.153.250.28

  Ok, thanks. What is a crop toll though? (Sorry. I feel stupid for asking )

  
• Cobalt

  April 2008 70.241.241.186

  :arrow:

  
• WeisseEdelweiss

  April 2008 72.72.230.99

  The Crop Tool (despite my spelling previously) is usually represented as a Lasso Tool or a Rectangle. It can also be accomplished in programs like Photoshop by using Marquee and Move. <br>You can select a section of an image and move it about.<br><br>For example, with your body length, select from the middle to the end of the tail and move it inward.<br><br>On MS Paint, The Crop Tool is represented as:<br><br><img src="http://www.io.com/~hcexres/brooklyn/planners/paint1.gif"; alt="http://www.io.com/~hcexres/brooklyn/planners/paint1.gif"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>(The Tool Selected)
• Cobalt

  April 2008 70.241.241.186

  Ahh. Ok, thanks