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• BlueRose

  March 2008 67.66.253.8

  One dark, rainy night, I, Maggie, was trying to fall asleep in my bed, when I heard pounding on the door. Every loud bang caused my heart to beat faster and faster, just beating against my chest and I found myself breathing heavily. My father was in his study, reading books of all kinds. When his face is in a book, he was far away. He probably couldn't hear the noice. I quietly got out of bed and tip-toed towards the door. That's when it happened. The door burst open and many men, armed men came storming in! One of them picked me up and carried me away! My father, Bo, was brought out of the house soon after. Who were these people? I heard of of the men, a man with a large knife which he held to my father's throat, say something about taking us back to their boss. Oh, what was happening? It seemed that the man with the knife was in charge of these guys, but then <span style="font-style:italic">he</span> had a boss. Someone who was not there.<br><br><span style="font-style:italic">(They are humans - just daughter and father,no mother - men are serious, not goofy - cruel men - maggie's 12 yrs - boss is very very cruel.)<br>Please do what you like with the story but follow what I put in italic above!</span>

  
  
• Faeriegirl83

  March 2008 76.212.137.133

  From then on I could see no more, for some kind of gag had been placed in my mouth and over my head. But I felt the men pick me up with course hands and shove me onto a hard floor. I felt it moving and realized I was in a horse trailer. With my hands and knees only, I crawled around, looking for my father. I didn't want to believe this was real. It was a fantasy in which I would wake up from in a few minutes, and everything would be back to normal, and I would feel my father's warm hand on my shoulder waking me up. Then I found my father's <span style="font-style:italic">real</span> hand. He was here with me! That's all that mattered, for now. Anything else will come later.

  
• Doggydog

  March 2008 74.230.12.37

  My hands weren't tied, so I took off the gag and looked around. The trailer was probably big enough for two horses. the trailer rattled and bounced down the road. i looked out the slits in the side of the trailer. it was a cold, gloomy night. Rain drizzled gently down from the dark sky. The moon was the only light. The car stopped and jolted me away from the window. i put the gag back over my face. Then, I heard the trailer door open and some men drag me out onto the wet street.

  
• TuffGirl

  April 2008 98.194.25.104

  Then I heard them drag my father out and yell at him. He wouldn't answer any of their questions. Then I heard them yell "Let's take him to boss he knows how to deal with him and then it will all be ours all ours". By then I was terrified. I tried yelling out but since I was gagged nobody could understand. Plus it was thunder storming really bad. After that I heard struggling I assumed it was father. Then I heard the clang of him being thrown back into the trailer, and the engine of them driving off. I was left alone...in the middle of the street. With nobody..until a car drove up and picked me up and all I was thinking was"Oh no not again someone please help me and bring me back my father."

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• Doggydog

  April 2008 74.230.14.172

  The person took the gag off my face. She looked friendly. "I am going to help you." she said. She put me in the car and drove away. "Why were you there?" I was speechless and all I could do is stare out the front window at the passing road.