<br><br>you dont need to take the critiques with such sass.<br>but its good for a begginer <span style="font-size:59">you are beginner right?</span><br><br>i like it. did you use photoshop
Oo...it does look like a borzoi. XD <br>I see borzoi in the muzzle and forehead. I think it's the curve, where there should be a stop. ;3<br><a href="http://www.dogforum.org/customavatars/avatar305_2.gif" target="_blank" class="bb-url">Borzoi face.</a><br><a href="http://www.carnisaf.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/03/MuddyFace.jpg" target="_blank" class="bb-url">Husky face.</a><br>See where the head and forehead stop at on the face of the husky? <br>She how short the forehead is on the husky compared to the borzoi?<br>You just need to practice on facial profiles. <br>I still think it's a cute picture. ^_^<br><br><span style="font-size:59">OMFG! You should make me a borzoi...when you have the time. ^_^</span>
<br><br><ul class="bb-list-unordered">Looks more Borzoi/Silken Windhoundish. <br>Make a more pronounced stop. <br>Shorten the head and muzzle a little. <br>A little less curve in both the muzzle and head. ;3<br></ul><br><br>
<br><br><ul class="bb-list-unordered">Eye needs to be lowered a little.<br>The stop on the muzzle looks like it needs to be lowered a little too...but that could just be me. :`<br>I think you did a better job on this one. ^_^<br></ul><br><span style="font-size:75"><br>Yes, I have too much time on my hands. XD</span>
<br><br><ul class="bb-list-unordered">Looks more Borzoi/Silken Windhoundish. <br>Make a more pronounced stop. <br>Shorten the head and muzzle a little. <br>A little less curve in both the muzzle and head. ;3<br></ul><br><br>
<br><br><ul class="bb-list-unordered">Eye needs to be lowered a little.<br>The stop on the muzzle looks like it needs to be lowered a little too...but that could just be me. :`<br>I think you did a better job on this one. ^_^<br></ul><br><span style="font-size:75"><br>Yes, I have too much time on my hands. XD</span>
LOL<br><br>Just tell me to and I'll stop. XD <br>Your art isn't bad at all so don't think I'm trying to lower your self-esteem or self-worth, cause really I'm not. XD <br>Truthfully I've never really critiqued art before, just thought I'd point out a few things on yours that stand out for practice. ;P <br>Let me know if I'm offending you, that isn't my intention.
Lol I am just playing with you <br>Yeah I know.. that one does look a little... diffrent xD<br>But He is special so don't make fun of the poor dear :P<br>hehe.<br>Yeah a few of them I have done are good.<br>Like on my other post. But these are ok.. I like the second one alot<br>better to!
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