Anyone want to read over an essay-type 'thingy' and tell me if you think it needs any improvements at all? <br><br>*Note* It's not a school essay or assignment.<br><br><br>It's just a basic "rough" draft (meaning I made it off the top of my head), but I'm not sure what I should change to make it sound more appealing to others. ^^ <br><br>It's not an inappropriate subject of any sort, but I think it's a controversial subject, so it'll be PM'd to whoever. Just to avoid any flamed posts or sour arguments. ^^<br><br><br>I suppose I could pay, if you really wanted. I just need 2-7 people to read it over by 9 PM (EST) tonight.<br><br><br>- Ana
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