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Buffy's Poetry Critique
Ok buffy has written some current poems.<br>I DO want critiques.<br>All of these were written by me!<br>Do NOT steal.<br><br>If you were to want one please PM me. i might be able to do one with a specific topic for a small price :P <br><br><span style="color:blue">Pleasure and Pain</span><br>In the darkness there she stands.<br>Though he holds her by the hand<br>She doesnt know just what he's thinking<br>He doesnt care who's heart he's breaking<br><br>She's been with him through all his lies<br>Noone thinks he ever tries<br>All for pleasure is his game<br>He doesnt realize she's in pain<br><br>She's with him until he's through<br>He's with her until he finds someone new<br>Even though they seem just fine<br>All will end in due time<br><br><span style="color:violet">In The End</span><br>I wonder why you act this way<br>All the childish games you play<br>I only want your attention<br>Just for you to stop and listen<br><br>I feel like you dont really care<br>And I worry that you wont be there<br>I understand how you feel inside<br>Even when you try to hide<br><br>I hope everything will be okay<br>And it wont have to end this way<br>Although I try with all my might<br>This might be a battle i just cant fight<br><br><span style="color:orange">Always There</span><br>I will catch you if you fall<br>Remember this above it all<br>I will always be there<br>When you just need someone that cares<br><br>If all you want is a friend<br>Im right here until the end<br>If the others fade away<br>I hope you know, im here to stay<br><br>We have our differences, yes its true<br>but i will always be here for you<br>You dont have to hesitate to ask<br>I have a feeling out friendship, is built to last<br><br><br>Thats all for now. i have 2 others but im not ready to upload them yet. lol.<br><br>Please critique but do not steal. i will not hesitate to report you.<br><br>Thanks<br>Buffy 
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