Chapter 1 & 2 of my story

Comments

• IRawrSkittles

  July 2007 67.172.5.140

  No one likes's it? :-(
• Berton

  July 2007 67.53.7.131

  i love it my cheese homie

  
• IRawrSkittles

  July 2007 67.172.5.140

  Tah, it's a bit slow right now..but it'll be better soonish
• CookiesCream2

  July 2007 75.54.235.234

  I love it!

  
• UnknownDreamland

  July 2007 71.166.115.185

  The only thing is, is that the chapters seem a bit short. But otherwise, I like it.

  
• IRawrSkittles

  July 2007 67.172.5.140

  Yeah, I know, the first 2 are kind of just, an introduction to everyone, but now the chapters are getting lengthier
• dachshund girl

  July 2007 24.31.10.140

  POST MORE ITS GOOD! <span style="font-size:42">Although when you said the lady came to the door I was thinking that she was from an adoption agency and he was going to get rid of the baby befor the mom got home</span>

  
• SarahJohnson

  July 2007 71.70.95.149

  Love it Tia dear. <br>Make more lol. You should publish it and illustrate it and stuff.
• IRawrSkittles

  July 2007 67.172.5.140

  Thanks guys :-)
• TopDogs1

  July 2007 74.227.175.24

  L-O-V-E IT!!!!

  
• Quietus

  July 2007 71.210.68.183

  <span style="text-decoration:underline">Love</span> it! Hurry with Chp. 4!<br><br><span style="font-size:25">he he..I'm a hurrier XD</span>